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I'm Uploading this, but nobody won the competition, The Host deserted the contest, and so, this isn't the best, and does not have good effects, but i still worked on it so I'm posting it.
Decent animation. Terrible choice of music.
lol @ the windows pinball sound effects.
The trembling camera effect looked cool in this animation. The stickman were drawn well, it's a great stickman video, especially compared to other stickman videos. The fight was well drawn, it looked realistic, the action was super. The head of the stickman were disproportionally small in some scenes. You. The background could have been better(I mean a moon with a nose?), and the anime emoticon didn't look so well, Well, you did a great job, I appreciate the special effects, the moving camera, and even the dust effect when the wall breaks. The fight was awesome, in the end it got a little laggy for a second.
Overall the animation is awesome. I give it a 9.
Thanks, and you're right... there was a minor resizing going on there lol
Animation is the strongest thing in this animation. You should look into making your backgrounds and environments more detailed, and you should use music from an artist that doesn't have copyright laws for their songs in effect.
You should also consider making the main character different looking somehow, like make them a different color, gender, give them a hot, SOMETHING to distinguish them from the people they kill.
In addition to this, it lacks a plot. It's just another (even if it is better quality) stick flash of stick people doing random acts of violence. I don't care what happens to the people in this flash nor am I amazed by the fight scenes.
I also recommend practicing audio, voices enhance many things and when you had the sticks talking it just looked ridiculous.
Not the worst flash out there, but needs improvement. Just practice more and you'll do pretty good here.
Thanks for the positive critique. This anim was done in practically a 3-4 days... I actually had a plot, and had voices for them, i had some friends do different accents. however, when i reformatted my laptop and ran the program it all got corrupted including the sounds... so i deleted all the sounds and just left the ones that worked and downloaded new ones.. but I solved the problem, i just needed a
quicktime update... wish i knew that before i tampered with the flash file :(. oh and i change the song, thanks for the pointers, i didn't think about copyrights.
A short film about a park bench
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