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okay for starters i know this sucks because i focused to much on the voice clips. i promise i will get better. anyway thanks to kkblack for voice clips yata yata yata please enjoy.
(EDIT : awesomedude1010 recorded the voices then he learned his account was hacked and changed. anyways, please visit http://awesomedude1010.ne wgrounds.com thank you)
gave me a nalsalgic laugh . this defines turd of week. keep at it tho - i mean your probably young. My first 2 movies I made were blammed, and look where im at now ;) i can see you making funny movies with experience. if you want to continue doing sprites, alway smake sure under export properties you have JPEG quality at 100, and break apart backgrounds if your not going to trace the bitmap ( bitmap propertis , tight and pixels, with 1 for both option. underthe modify menu. or you can use 10 for color threshold if you wanna kuz thats what I do 2 b original ;).Hope this helps!
thank you! ( ^ '.' ^ )
Oh, this is bad.
I mean like, REALLY bad.
Graphics, voice and text boxes.
At least it's a start
This actually reminded me of when I first trying flash. The fun of figuring things out and the making of your first movie, with voice acting and a decent story is a delight. Even though it wasn't good it made me nostalgic and I can see that you put a lot of effort into it. All I can say is that you just need to keep trying, listen to people's advice and get inspired by other flash submissions. There's a long way ahead of you but if you can keep your ambition up it won't be long before you've made a movie with your own drawings, a coherent story line and some decent voice acting. All the best!
Where do I start?
I am glad that you acknowledge the fact that this has very low quality. The main things that were wrong with it was that the animation and voice acting were bad. It seems like you guys were getting too close to the microphone as I heard some retreating noises or something like that. It is not all that clear but you did have subtitles. There was just so little going on. Why does Mario suddenly go into a Legend Of Zelda building?
Why is his mom a blonde? Nothing just seems to go anywhere with these jokes. I suggest you work on backgrounds as most of this did not seem to have a background at all. Please try to work on transition effects using sprites. I know that I do not have Flash Player myself, but you could do so much more with it.
You got "Turd of the Week" award , are you happy now?
How will Kratos survive the Night?
A story about a kid and idk...
A short muisc video based on the classic song "The Window Cleaner" sung by George Formby
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