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May 7, 2011 | 5:03 PM EDT
  • Turd of the Week May 10, 2011

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okay for starters i know this sucks because i focused to much on the voice clips. i promise i will get better. anyway thanks to kkblack for voice clips yata yata yata please enjoy.

(EDIT : awesomedude1010 recorded the voices then he learned his account was hacked and changed. anyways, please visit http://awesomedude1010.ne wgrounds.com thank you)

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gork5gork5

Rated 0 / 5 stars June 15, 2012

i did not finish booo


thedarkzero responds:

Wow, such CREATIVE criticism. C'mon now, you could do better.


DeadRewindDeadRewind

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars July 1, 2011

Haha.

I actually smiled. (:
Not bad, but not the best.
I'm not gonna rip on the animation because I couldn't do better.
3/5
7/10


thedarkzero responds:

thanks! ( ^ '.' ^ )


chubroidchubroid

Rated 4 / 5 stars May 31, 2011

this video is.. um... pretty cool?

i think is video is alright, i guess. kinda funny.


thedarkzero responds:

i know.. it's not that good.....


XwaynecoltXXwaynecoltX

Rated 2 / 5 stars May 28, 2011

Needs more effort

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so thought i would give this flash a try see how it is, by popular vote seems like its not the most popular, but i tend to review differant then most so here goes, Ill start off with the preloader and loading time, the loading time was ok thought it could have been cut down just a tad, as for the menu page or sorta menu page you could have done abit more with that, So ill start off first with the {AUDIO} it was hard to hear but gllad there was some subtitles, even the subtitles were hard to hear, as a {TIP} have black text over white backround so it shows off better and you may also want to {BOLD} the text, so the whole toon was kinda funny and amusing, more animation is needed also some better backrounds would be nice aswell, other then that i thought it was ok but still needs lots more effort on your end, anyways good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was all ok but needs more detail and effort, the loading time was ok thought it could have been cut down just a tad, also some more effort on the {MENU-PAGE} like a logo a title and so on, have black text over white backround so it shows off better and you may also want to {BOLD} the text, some better backrounds would be nice aswell, this was an ok start but needs more effort.

~~OVERALL~~
An amusing flash, does need more effort though

~X~


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thedarkzero responds:

thanks!


SuperMarioFan9000SuperMarioFan9000

Rated 0 / 5 stars May 23, 2011

Sorry

But I have to agree to the others, but some tips might make it better:
Make sure to remove white pixels in the sprites the voice have bad quality so, I don't know any tips about that, the background, it's bad quality too.. The voice clips are good, but there bad quality. The background are bad quality so, go to library, and go to the bitmap of the background, and right-click properties, and make sure it's "Lossless (PNG/Gif)" turned on, in the bitmap properties window. I must be sorry for this, but you have gone angry before, I wasn't that too angry (Well before I knew you and created Mario Battle Bros. ep. 1) and I calmed down and decided not to answer everyone's review "Don't like it, Don't review!" Someone also reviewed my flash in ep. 3 and I edited it, to "Fine, Sorry" Just don't copy what I said to people, (Or maybe you used to hate bad reviews)


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thedarkzero responds:

well, thanks for the advice. and i just was getting really mad at everyone.