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Sorry for this rushed work. But i still want to upload this flash exactly on Pico day.
I will keep updating it as the days go along ;)
Not the best submission of the day but I will give you credit for at least trying to make something related to Pico day. Now I await someone to do one on Nene which might not even happen sadly. Enjoyed how throughout the whole animation everything was shaky anyways.
The P-Bot body part was kind of out of touch with the tune if you were trying to make the angry faces change with the drum beat playing. Nice how you ended it with a link to the song playing which was good I think. Darnell seemed to be pretty chilled out here as well.
Overall, nicely done little vid.
Thank you it might not look like it. But i spend alot of time making this animation. I had so many ideas. I wish i started with the animation even earlier! But life got in the way, man i hate saying that all the time buts its true.
Anyways thanks for the review ;)
If you were gonig for a cartoony style, you could had used smalled pen size and a bit scetchy prehaps?
Ok you do know you can have different layers so that you don't have to redraw the background every time? It just looks pretty awful having everything shaking the whole time. Also nothing really happens and it all looks pretty lazy. Try writing a script or at least have some idea of what the flash is supposed to make the audience feel, cause this just doesn't do anything.
I do have script. But didnt have enough time to fully use it. Also the shaking was done on purpose. To give it that cartooony style.
I like it
I think it could be good when its done, a bit short for now. The music isnt bad, the animation is pretty good too. No faults to it, just a bit short and not enough info to give you a higher score.
Yeah i will finish this. Still busy with it right now!
not bad i like the art in this
Thanks im glad you did! ;)
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