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Sorry for this rushed work. But i still want to upload this flash exactly on Pico day.
I will keep updating it as the days go along ;)
+ Lively and catchy. I could imagine using this music in other Flash.
the basic art and idea is good and had potential
- Not much too it, when it comes to animation and action. You have those coloured power displays on the front that could and should go up and down. You have a character that should be funky and is completley still. You have speakers that should pulse with beat and don't. It all just stops while the beat goes on. If you were to come back next year and build this into a really good submission, I would look forward to it, but right now it has no replay value as a video IMO.
I completly agree with you. Next year i'll do my best ;)
The character designs were neatly done you really do work hard on those don't you? Even if you didn't take your time you did great at animating Darnell and P-Bot they were neatly done with the details having great color put into them. The audio was a great choice especially the fact that you created it you should be given all the more credit for the amazing yet energizing song nice job man. Finally I think a lot of effort was put into this and you deserve a pat on the back.
Well the pace and sense of timing was a little off as it was at the most a minute making it less enjoyable than it probably should be if it were longer. The plot needed to be a little more clear as it zoomed in on the angry faces for awhile making it unclear what exactly we were supposed to be seeing.
A nice flash man I'd watch this for the great music and just to see the effects of Darnell but it was to short to make me want to replay it again.
Wow this is a really good review. Yes i could repeate myself and say i didnt have enough time to state my point. But there are no excuses. Still even when i had little time i had to still do it better. Anyways compliments on your good review and thank you for your time ;)
This is exactly how chill I imagine Darnell. Him pumpin' out tunes, beast. I'm giving you a ten because obviously a lot of effort was put into this, and I know you can and will improve. I'ma d-load the t-rack.
Hahahah! Thanks man. I'm glad you liked it anyways and saw the effort put into the cartoon ;)
glad u submittedsomething
better than nothin!
Well i geuss so..
Ok so I'll do this review in English.
There are a few things I didn't like,
It's very sketchy and messy, it was short and pretty random.
But the idea was pretty nice and it was fun to watch.
Maybe you should use a smaller brush, so it doesn't look that messy and stuff.
But yeah, it's a pretty nice little animation, nothing too interesting, but enjoyable to watch,
Im glad you enjoyed it! Still i want to make it better and hope it will be considerd a good animation!
And thank you for the review ;)
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