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This is a simple teaser trailer for a series I'm working on called Rising based around the main character, Drake Marcolv.
I didn't work very hard on this trailer but I wanted to at least release something after all this time.
Just cause it's been done...
...Is never a reason to shy away from an idea. Bleach isn't the only "hero's greatest power can't be controlled" series. Avatar: The Last Airbender, Naruto, The Incredible Hulk, etc, all successful even though the idea had "been done". Fuck Bleach (that has nothing to do with this flash, just fuck Bleach forever). I hope you stick with this, I'd like to see what you accomplish, and like a person with a brain I'd like to judge based on how it actually turns out rather than just whether the idea's been done in some form or not. EVERYTHING has been done in some form.
Two things though. One, this trailer doesn't show a whole lot of frame-by-frame animation, it's mostly tweens and fades. I'm a sucker for fbf, so please include more of that in the first official episode. Also, I believe i can hear your lips separating and smacking together in the audio.... Or... I suppose your tongue losing suction against the roof of your mouth... Like someone chewing food with their mouth open. It's a little offputting.
lookin forward 2 itbra
Not bad, But...
It kinda reminded me of some mangas like bleach where the main character is consumed by his own power.
Anyway don't stop this, let's see how far you can go with that story before saying any more critics, right ?
This is a very good trailer. Not all the plot is told, and it is really well done like that.
That way, I really want to know the story of Drake Marcolv.
Good Luck with the rest : )
well it looks cool and all... it's just that the idea of a secret research facility turning someone into a weapon who then uses this powers to take revenge on those who did this to him and probably become some superhero or something afterwards... well it is used quite often.
But that doesn't necessarly mean you can't make a good series out of it, we'll see.
it looks good
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