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*Update* Holy crap guys, 3.56?! :D That's my best score so far, thanks!
Well this took awhile to write, and it actually has nothing to do with Mario, but I used the sprites from it so I guess that counts for something :P.
Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated.
Awesome guy is by Psycosis91
and Pokemon Tower Defense is by Olmate
*If you watch the movie it will all make since.
Also I know that the writing is really corny.
*Update* Here's the better version on youtube (http://www.youtube.com/w atch?v=XxoDR4u_c3Y)
It was good.
I like the paper mario theme. I only wish the text would scroll faster. That's just me.
Hmm, I'll make it so it scrolls faster when you press a button... Well time to learn some more AS!
I'm sure once the plot shows itself it will be a lot more interesting.
Yeah this one was sort of just to introduce the characters and setting, so I could add on to it without having odd ends everywhere. I'm still pretty new to writing, but its a lot of fun.
We dont take kindly the thieves 'round here
lol... very entertaining. Keep up the great work :D
Haha, I'm glad you liked it. I'll try and make the next one even better. I was tempted to right this response in html, because I'm a rebel.
It was okay
Story's not TOO bad, but I give it a 7 cuz of the music/sfx quality. I hope to see more of your work c:
Ehhh, well that counts for something :D. I had to compress the sounds by a lot so it wouldn't be 10mb. Thanks for the review!
Two restaurant mascots crash their co-worker's house party.
He stands against his worst enemy, himself.
4 college burnouts fighting monsters... Trying to make money.
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