A Paper Mario Story
Author Comments
*Update* Holy crap guys, 3.56?! :D That's my best score so far, thanks!
Well this took awhile to write, and it actually has nothing to do with Mario, but I used the sprites from it so I guess that counts for something :P.
Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated.
Awesome guy is by Psycosis91
and Pokemon Tower Defense is by Olmate
*If you watch the movie it will all make since.
Also I know that the writing is really corny.
*Update* Here's the better version on youtube (http://www.youtube.com/w atch?v=XxoDR4u_c3Y)
Reviews
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars May 24, 2011
Cool.
Wow, that was pretty good. I enjoyed it alot and hope you bring some more good stuff in. If this was your first, then your off to a great start, but if this is a later one, then keep it up! I hope alot of people will enjoy this and keep up the awesome work.
Rated 4 / 5 stars May 14, 2011
pretty dang entertaining
this is pretty interesting, more of em in the future ? :D
I hope so they take a bit longer to make than what I'm used too. But when I have time defiantly!
Rated 5 / 5 stars April 28, 2011
Great Idea
I really like what you did with the music. This was like a mind fuck for me, paper mario has always been my favorite game and to see something new done with the original PM style is awesome. The great thing about PM is that its doors are always open for some out of this world stuff, you could bring in the sun(flowerfields style), Shyguy armies, more cooking(Tayce T.) and it would all fit the style. Great job with the animation, cant wait to see the next one
Yeah, I've always admired what they had done with that game. I hope to make this a really cool story I just hope I don't get over my head :P.
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars April 28, 2011
Talented but needs better exposition.
I gave you a 9 because I know first hand how hard these sprites are to work with, and you made them look pretty decent, although sometimes they are messy looking no matter what. Still you should look to combined different mediums to make the sprites look better, like from other games, but that is up to you. Story line was a typical first episode of a series, it did characterize one cliche aspect of that by not revealing much of the story line making this episode a bit dry and ambiguous. I know what you went for by not revealing too much, but you should have revealed a bit more, in my opinion. Keep trying to blend humor into your epic and it should turn out original. Good luck. Oh and maybe some voice actors too ;) can't hurt
I felt it was missing something I just couldn't figure out what :s. I'm trying to stay true to the original sprite style and only adding custom sprites that I or others have made... But maybe in the next one I can find a way to make them look better or even a little bit different. Thanks for the advice!
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars April 28, 2011
Could use some work
It's funny, for sure. That "I WILL DEVOUR YOUR SKULL" line really cracked me up, since it was such a good random threat. But you misspelled a few words, like "chef" as "chief", "thief" as "theif", and you messed up your "too"s and your "to"s. Too is like too much, and to is more like I'm going to.
But you should definitely continue this, it could be really great!
Ahhh no way. I thought for sure I had fixed all of the spelling errors. In past movies I've made there wasn't really any plot, it was mostly random gags haha, I guess that still shows in my later works.