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Apr 26, 2011 | 5:28 PM EDT
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I've been thinking about starting a little webcomic, thought I'd share it and see what you guys think. Don't freak out, it isn't animated, and I didn't see much point in adding audio since it wasn't, and is pretty short. But I wanted to share it any how.

It takes place in a kind of fantasy/steampunk world. The plot will revolve around people who dig up bones in the desert. Kinda hard to explain without it sounding super boring, but hopefully the comic will explain itself.

Some adult content so don't read it at work.

Edit--------
*Front paged! :O I didn't expect.. thank you. Thank you. ^_^*

To everyone, it is short because this is only the first two weeks of updates. I update once a week with batches of frames per scene. Future updates will be much longer I promise. Thanks for the feedback, it helps.

Reviews


SikesSikes

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Pretty good!

I'm not really into comics in a swf. If the images are going to be static I'd rather just see them laid out on a webpage. This wasn't too bad though. It was good for what it is. The dialogue was a little cheesy here and there, but the art was pretty nice. My only real question is what's up with the boobie chick? She wears straps that seem to have no purpose but to cover her (clothing) but she only covers one boob. Why is that? I could see if she was going all natural and then I'd reason that's just her way or the way of her people or something.

I could see if she dressed in all straps, she'd be wearing clothing like normal but just expressing a unique fashion sense. But I can't for the life of me figure out why someone would fall in the middle and choose to cover part of it but randomly walk around with an exposed breast. Please explain the character to me.


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Hyptosis responds:

Well there is no way to see it right now but all of her people dress with those straps, men and women alike. Similar to how you see some greek or roman clothings have an exposed breast. I originally made them completely nude but thought it looked kinda silly. They're also highly religious although you don't see that yet, easy answer is "They just dress that way." But it is a racial thing, not a personal thing.


CanilashCanilash

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Mild nudity?

Mild nudity? I didn't see any, let me look again... oh, a breast. I guess that counts.

I like the drawing style, and it doesn't look half-assed. It's a little short on plot to know if it's worth reading. It seems like a good start, and since the art is good, you'll probably gain a good reader base.


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FinnGriswoldFinnGriswold

Rated 4 / 5 stars

I like it!



davidstanleydavidstanley

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Very cool!

I like your art style and knowledge of perspective. Great job on getting me interested in who the characters are and what they are doing.

Most music would become a disturbance, but another idea would be to let certain panels contain background noise or ambience. For example, if a page of the comic took place in a rainy jungle, maybe you'd hear the drops falling and some of the wildlife noises. Just another way to pull the audience into your world.

I'm interested to see what happens next!


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spacebeastspacebeast

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

cool!

It LOOKS ace, however just as i was getting into it it ended. Make the next one longer dude!


Hyptosis responds:

Well, this was just a sample to see if people actually cared for it and the style. Thanks.