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Apr 26, 2011 | 5:28 PM EDT
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Author Comments

I've been thinking about starting a little webcomic, thought I'd share it and see what you guys think. Don't freak out, it isn't animated, and I didn't see much point in adding audio since it wasn't, and is pretty short. But I wanted to share it any how.

It takes place in a kind of fantasy/steampunk world. The plot will revolve around people who dig up bones in the desert. Kinda hard to explain without it sounding super boring, but hopefully the comic will explain itself.

Some adult content so don't read it at work.

Edit--------
*Front paged! :O I didn't expect.. thank you. Thank you. ^_^*

To everyone, it is short because this is only the first two weeks of updates. I update once a week with batches of frames per scene. Future updates will be much longer I promise. Thanks for the feedback, it helps.

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SerraStrykeSerraStryke

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Gj, cute 1-liners

i'm interested to see what's next up ur sleeve.


Hyptosis responds:

Thanks, the next one will be a lot longer and more fleshed out.


hidden-lizardhidden-lizard

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Make more..

I read the review below me, and it is quite in depth and is quite constructive in some areas, but beyond that, I think you are an amazing artist and have a knack for making decent stories. Please, do make more. I'd really like to see this fleshed out!

Side note, make the next one's (because now you HAVE to make them!) longer? (Please? :D ) I might suggest also, if you did them like you did The Sagittarian 'Choose your own adventures' then it might immerse the viewers more. Thanks again, hope to see more from you soon!
5/5
9/10 <-(Because of the length. Lol sorry.)


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BietarnuBietarnu

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

pretty good

the artwork was pretty good and so was what started off as a story but it might just be me but what the point of the sound effects in the beginning when they barely seem to relate to the comic itself? anyways good work and i hope you continue with the comic cant wait to see what it becomes


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SnowstreakSnowstreak

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Good, Now what?

This might be good, that is if there was more. Where is the rest?



EdacusEdacus

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Great work!

That looks to be quite the promising web comic, maybe even more, just one small thing to work on is the dialog seemed rushed, the spacing slides add a lot of character especially for web comics. Your first 3 sides were ideal, it was a calm desert, then explosion, and then it starts to zoom in, that got me interested. After that, it was like a machine gun of information and characters that are being thrown at me left and right and have no information or names about them. Looking forward to see more, I do hope you keep updates here on Newgrounds. Kewdos


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