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Apr 26, 2011 | 5:28 PM EDT
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Author Comments

I've been thinking about starting a little webcomic, thought I'd share it and see what you guys think. Don't freak out, it isn't animated, and I didn't see much point in adding audio since it wasn't, and is pretty short. But I wanted to share it any how.

It takes place in a kind of fantasy/steampunk world. The plot will revolve around people who dig up bones in the desert. Kinda hard to explain without it sounding super boring, but hopefully the comic will explain itself.

Some adult content so don't read it at work.

Edit--------
*Front paged! :O I didn't expect.. thank you. Thank you. ^_^*

To everyone, it is short because this is only the first two weeks of updates. I update once a week with batches of frames per scene. Future updates will be much longer I promise. Thanks for the feedback, it helps.

Reviews


Dragonsoul0Dragonsoul0

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars April 28, 2011

It was pretty good.

My only real complaints are the length and lack of any sound. Some music would have been nice, also would have liked the story to go a bit further, it just seems like two unrelated scenes as it is.


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b003b003

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars April 28, 2011

Nooooo!

I was gettin' interested and then nuthin. If this is gonna be a web gonna list it on drunk duck or onlinecomics.net something like that?


Hyptosis responds:

I dunno if I'll put it on drunkduck or not, I am building a site for it so that people with iphones and stuff can read it. Also I plan on releasing the story in batches similar to this on newgrounds as well.


StazzStazz

Rated 2 / 5 stars April 28, 2011

Lol

A slide show? Really?



destroyyoualldestroyyouall

Rated 1 / 5 stars April 28, 2011

I just have one question.

What the fuck just happened.



ScrolerScroler

Rated 2 / 5 stars April 28, 2011

well that was boring

Very short, no music, just seemed like random stuff.

What was the point of the nudity?

I just wasn't feeling it I guess, just seemed boring to me

I will say they were drawn really well, but the story isn't to my liking.

Next time maybe have music that fits with the story or whats happening in the scene, and make it way longer.