I didn't get past the first stage. The lava explanation thing is a physical object that ironically causes me to fall into the lava below. Also I noticed you only jump when moving and sometimes never return when jumping off screen.

Graphics: 2

Graphics are dreadful, even by MY standards, and I like simple graphics. I can barely identify what the pictures represent. At least use some thicker paintbrush instead of pencil- drawn lines.

Sound: 0

There's no sound.

Violence: 3

The theme promises a lot of violence, but sadly, I wasn't able to play long enough to see any of it.

Interactivity: 7

It's a platformer, so there's lots of interaction involved.

Humor: 1

I wasn't at all pleased by the graphics and gameplay. I got stuck behind the screen and just frustrated at the lava sign preventing me from jumping!

Overall: 2

Actually, I should vote to blam this, but the errors in this game are clearly not made on purpose so I'll give you guys some slack.

YAY!

Very good game!

I love it!

I love it!

Wiiiiiiiiii!

Wiiiiiiiiii!

Not even a beta version

Since you're new to programming I'm not going to shred this game into pieces and destroy it. Instead, here are some suggestions, which, I hope, will be helpful :)
-Take care of the graphics and sound: presentation is huge in a flash game
-You can't jump when you stand still... not sure why
-Falling off the screen should be a death. Just add lava on the bottom of the screen
-The enemy AI could be smarter
-Touching the ceiling just ruins some levels. It's really easy to make the guy jump a little bit less-he doesn't need the sumper jump!
-Make a long game, with creative levels and diversity thrown in.

Those are basic stuff you should work on. Do not, however, keep posting games like these. I'm sure you could fix all this stuff and give us a full working game we'd all love.

Another thing, I never worked with The Games Factory, and, for that reason, I don't know it's limitations. But I would recommend using Flash. Yes, it will take time, but you'll be proud of yourself once you get something great.