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Edit: Thanks for the first and the front, guys.
Ah yes, it's been a good five years. The procrastination, the rush to finish on time, scrambling to shoehorn an Easter egg, sudden satisfaction... Feels great man.
Wow Sh0T-D0wn, its been a great series bud.
Its really cool seeing how this series has changed and evolved over the years. When it started out, you needed a lot of improvement and with every episode, you showed that you are always working to better yourself as an artist. It sucks to see it come to an end, but you have so many more ideas in your head, you'll keep the good stuff coming. And from the years you've been on newgrounds, I can tell you will always strive to be better. Thats a quality that not many artists have nowadays. Keep it up bud!
So what's the point of the plot anymore?
I still don't get what the fuck is going on with this series. This last one was just so random. However, this has got to be the funniest one out of them. I mean just the faces managed to make me giggle like a schoolgirl. I was also impressed by the smoothness of the animation.
that was rediculous and annoying
I hate works that are rushed and has no story or plot
Y U NO LIKE THIS!!!! it's freakin' awesome! i laugh sooooo hard!!
this is pretty awful
the writing mostly. everything in this is just repugnant and full of overused themes. the Dragon Ball Z styled fighting isn't cool, its tired. it makes the popping up jokes even less funny than the nothingness they were. writing "LoL sexism" is like saying "LOL i made a sexist 'joke' on a sign that i'm sure 2% of my audience can read and they probably wont get its sexist without accouncing it down in the corner!!! laugh at me!!!". never do that again. the animations were just ok, and showed you really wanted this project to work (which apparently it did), and i honestly don't know how.
the usage of foreground jokes is not funny. thats something else you should quit doing. writing whatever just happened in the corner for 12 frames doesn't make it funny. if they weren't there, maby i would have mildly enjoyed the craziness and the unbridled stupidity. also, the music volume was WAY too loud to make out what any character was saying. that wasn't even excusable because you can dynamically adjust audio in flash. that was just laziness.
in conclusion, less is more. the more effort you put into something small makes it shine that much brighter to everyone, while putting too much effort everywhere is just a tangled mess, and thats what this flash is. A tangled mess.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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