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Scratch what I said before. I might continue.
In this flash's later stages. the story was putting a bad taste in my mouth. Later, in the second scene, you can tell I was just phoning it in, but since I don't like to waste time, here ya are.
Pardon the "..." loading screen. It's because I used TFL for the text. Will fix it later.
EDIT 2.80? Come on, guys. Don't leave me hanging. Tell me what I did wrong?
You're NOT continuing this?
Then I gotta say that I'm really dissapointed. Only 2 episodes out and I'm already hooked. You have amazing flash skills and for you to turn this into a comic would be a damn shame, but it's your prerogative as the artist, and a comic would be better than cancelling altogether. But hey no matter what you choose, anyone can see your obvious genius, and I appreciate you sharing it here on New grounds, even if only for 2 episodes.
You are too kind. Yes, I'm disappointed, too. But I need to make something fresh in order to compete with the people here in Newgrounds.
Yet again you make an amazing vid! Flawless, except for the lack of the next video! The characters have personalities, the plot is intriguing, HOW THE HELL DID THIS ONLY GET 2.9???
I have no idea....
That was really great. The story is really good and i hope you choose to continue this. I love the flow of the story and everything from the music to the graphics is perfect. i hope to see the 3rd part soon.
I realy enjoyed this flah, you obviously have some skills when it comes to sprites. only question is why does this have such a low score? story is captivating and the sprites are awesome... and also, who doesnt love 8-bit? would be a shame if you choose not to continue.
I have no idea. I wish that the people who down voted me could leave why. It's not the low score I'm upset about. I can take criticism well. It upsets me that they voted down and didn't tell me what was wrong...
I crave feedback here, people!
I thank you for making one of the coolest nintendo characters look cool!!!
( big fan of link)
You sure do have some serious skills though, thats what made it so amazing and much more!!!
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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