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Apr 20, 2011 | 1:13 AM EDT
  • Daily 5th Place April 21, 2011

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EDIT
I'm changing the actual title of the series because frankly the title "Original Character Tournament" is too general. There are many other OCTs on the internet and this is just another of them.

The new title is called, "Dareva's Last Will OCT" because that is the name of the OCT. However I can't change the actual title in the Newgrounds submission details so it will still appear as OCT.

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After a difficult process of making this animation, despite having to solve some problems with Flash, I finally finish the next part to this little mini-series. It was an interesting challenge, because this happens to be my first battle animation.

Before anyone points them out, I'll say what things that could be improved on that I'm aware of.
First, voice acting. Please don't comment on the fact that my voice needs more emotion. I'm voice acting as MYSELF, and I normally sound emotionless. I say everything as I would say them in real life and I'm trying to sound more confident in my lines. As far as the British actor, it was really hard to find a decent one. I did manage to find one but he was too busy to send me lines and cancelled out at the last minute. I had to use my dad instead.

Second, the animation itself. Self-explanatory, I'm improving.

Third, everything else which is just being nit-picky. I'm gonna have to figure out what else to improve after a few animations or so.

Anyways, thanks for watching!

Reviews


2040hand2040hand

Rated 4 / 5 stars April 21, 2011

Can't find any female voice acters ehh?

the voice acting was "painful" and you don't have any one for her voice. And there are plenty of options (your sister, mother, girl friend, ect). The animation was great! and so was the story line! if you find any girls to do your voice this could win first prize!



niko17brniko17br

Rated 5 / 5 stars April 21, 2011

Very good

This was a simple animation, but, because of the great history and music, this is a very good animation. I can't wait for the next one.



invuloninvulon

Rated 5 / 5 stars April 21, 2011

lol

I realy like the ''crap'' BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMM



AliskusAliskus

Rated 5 / 5 stars April 21, 2011

Hahahah so great :D

You are just awesome man.That was awesome.You don't need very long reviews.


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hiperpot001hiperpot001

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars April 21, 2011

to be honest...

actually was kinda simple animation, but was really good in my opinion
and i dont say is a bad one trust me, it was VERY good one
i know that with some training you will be better

anyway, the music and the sound effect were pretty good too
but the voices....i don't know but i think something's not right

maybe is my imagination i don't know
still was pretty good, congratulations ^-^