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Apr 19, 2011 | 7:03 PM EDT

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okay just to get this straight im not trying to steal the sprites i just dont know how theyre from. anyways i understand that this sucks BUT I REALLY AM A BEGINNER! ive seen stuff worse than this and it still passsed! so PLEASE, PLEASE DONT KICK THIS OFF. at least give it a three.

p.s. this is a sprite movie if you dont like sprites, DONT WATCH THIS.



Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

theres your three...

I could be a jerk about this, but what would that accomplish? I know that flash animation is hard, but dont give up!
1)first off, compress the file. its too large for the length.
2) zoom in on the action!
3) sound issues... im glad that you added a theme to it, but it was lacking sound effects... that is necessary for a sucessful sprite movie.
4)Make it longer!
5) On the replay button, dont try to be even remotely funny unless it is a complete comedy.
But, this flash is not all bad... i liked the story, just the presentation needs some work.

thedarkzero responds:

thanks for the advice and by the way i meant vote 3


Rated 1 / 5 stars

Spelling and Grammar. Please.

You wouldn't believe how it affects whether people take you seriously or not.

thedarkzero responds:

im a sucky speller....


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

It's OK...

It's an OK short. The text moves extremely fast, though, and the film on the whole could use a little more meat. Still good for a beginner, though. Keep working hard and improving! ^_^

thedarkzero responds:

thank you! (^ '.' ^)


Rated 2 / 5 stars

You've got potential

The animation is smooth and react well with each other. Might want to watch out on the edges of the screen aren't crisp enough to hide some of the background flaws. Also be sure to watch the final product as the dialog at the end was too fast to read most of it. Good luck with the next project.

thedarkzero responds:

my next project has voice acting so no worry about the text but im still making it longer.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Maybe good

For your first, make sure that the dialog is readable, and make sure to change the background color to black just click a blank space, and go to properties and make the background color black, that's what I did to episode 3 though.. Nice good though music choice was great.. But be sure to check the spelling, and make the sprites bigger or use V-cam instead, good though...

thedarkzero responds:

thanks dude !