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A Fowl End 5 Points Once you go green...
Skydiving 5 Points Who needs a parachute?
Blast Off! 10 Points An ending that's out of this world!
True End 10 Points That's what really happened?

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**Note: Yes there is a lot of words. This is an INTERACTIVE VISUAL NOVEL. So reviews that say there is a lot of words, that shouldn't be a bad point, Take this for what it is, not what you expect it to be. Thanks.**

Created for Newgrounds Game Jam 4.

Team Mohawk Dairy!

Our handicap was that all graphics had to be created OUTSIDE of flash.
We went with a hand drawn and scanned, classic retro feel.

Everything was created in 72 hours.
The story was written in 72 hours.
The art was done in 72 hours.
the code was written in 72 hours.

Hope you enjoy.

Can you get All 4 endings?
True ending is the best.

(Click with mouse to continue in the game.)

EDIT: Oh my gosh! Front page? Wow. Thanks for your support everyone. We really appreciate it!

EDIT 2: PooPooTheGorilla syas to PM him if you can find the secret message in the Alien room, you may even get a prize!

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Rated 3.5 / 5 stars April 19, 2011

So... Much... Text...

Overall, not a bad game. The twist was silly, unoriginal, and poorly-handled, but I can accept that. The alternate endings are non-sequitor and even more stupid, but it's SORT of funny...

The whole humor aspect just seems like you're trying too hard...

But on the other hand, the game works, is a game, and the graphics are actually pretty good.

As a last zinger, the fact that you have to click TWICE to get through text boxes is jut a pain.

tl;dr, The game's solid, but far short of excellent. Pretty damn good for a Game Jam game, though.

tenentenen responds:

Once the text has been printed, only one click is required to advance.
If you click before that, the entirety of the line is printed, so that you dont have to wait for it to type out.
It's still one click to advance.
Thats the standard for text based visual novels.

Thanks for your input.
I'm going to make a better game, with a similar style, but way better story, and such.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars March 19, 2012

It had a nice storyline the creepyness the humor made it even darker and twisted. You should make another one maybe "Mystery Of Willow Mannor 2" if you have not already.

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Rated 3.5 / 5 stars April 19, 2011

all in all a good game

The story was interesting, the extra endings were fun. THe flaws to the game were:
1.When you die you start all over again, you have to click through all the text at the begining, that was a little bit frustraiting
2.The only action done by the character that made an impact on the world of the game gets completely discarded. I mean the killing of Norm. You kill him and he appears again like nothing happened.

But, as stated in the title of the review, this is a good game

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tenentenen responds:

Thanks for the comments.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars April 18, 2011

not bad but...

You really should use some voices who tell the story... It'll give you that extra chill when you play it and let's people with adhd enjoy the game too:p


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars April 20, 2011

Needs faster pacing

Mainly I that have the most stupid ideas, like killing the groundkepper (even if that didn't take me to the beginning), the game has a very slow pace. I know that you wanted to create a atmosphere there, but the slow text wasn't necessary.
The art is good as well as the sound. There isn't much animation, but I like these kind of games. Nice story.

Congratulations on your game!

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