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Something random I worked on over the weekend for practice (which I need more of). I think I'm going to do this every weekend.
Animation; 8 / 10
Audio; 2 / 10
Content; 1 / 10
Alrighty then! The animation itself was very smooth so you seem to know what you are doing in that respect although I must say it was extremely short, I was hoping for something a little longer! There wasn't really much in the way of audi except for sound effects and the length of the animtion doesn't really help the audio at all. As for the content...I completely understand that this is a test animation, but may I suggest that you do all of the test animations yourself? Maybe get family and friends to review it and tell you what they think! Then start creating longer and more complex animations!
I don't think this is too bad an animating style and I think that if you just apply yourself to a longer animation you could produce some really awesome stuff!
All in all; 4 / 10
Could have been good
You did'nt expand on it, This would have got a much higher score if you expanded on it. Like the tic tac could have been magic, or a key to atlantis, Just Something. keep trying though
well....it was different.
i watched it an expected a more lengthy flash i thought that the tic-tac might have talked and that there would be more characters although i enjoyed it slightly i would not recommend it, but because it was practice i can see why you would post it on newgrounds, and as for that "Something random I worked on over the weekend for practice (which I need more of)." as long as you make your flashes longer i think your set.
like how the animation is smooth. but it H.A.S. to be longer.
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