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First try at animating. School assignment but I was free to do what ever I wanted.
I had no idea how to find good sounds back then.. :p
So what is this about?
i wish i had flash.
Animation; 5 / 10
Audio; 5 / 10
Content; 4 / 10
Okay then. The animation is very choppy in places, I suggest that you do what you normally do when animating, then go back into the animation and add more keyframs just to make it smoother! The audio was alright I have a feeling that you took the audio from a website and had to fit it into the scene, which for your first animation is completely fine. Content was alright as well, although I was a tad confused as to what was happening.
Special note; you seem very capable of drawing well! The mermaid was very well drawn, shaded and everything so you get an additional point from me there!
Also keep animating! I realise that this is your first animation, but everybody started from somewhere! So keep it up!
All in all; 5 / 10
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