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Apr 10, 2011 | 2:56 AM EDT

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Author Comments

This is my first flash movie i ever made (as you may notice) but i really like it and always wanted to upload a flash to newgrounds : )

thanks to "Cast" for converting this to a swf file for me

Cast you da man

For better quality go to my youtube version of it =]

http://www.youtube.com/wa tch?v=-fFUAX6UN1w

Reviews


JomillexJomillex

Rated 2 / 5 stars April 13, 2011

SAME!

YOU USED THE SAME TRANSITION OVER AND OVER AGAIN!
If you do make another one of these do not do that!



ShdwProductionsShdwProductions

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars April 10, 2011

Nice concept

Animation; 6 / 10
Audio; 5 / 10
Content; 6 / 10

Okay the animation was not all that bad considering you made the animation from sprites. It was a little juddery in places and a little unclear as to who was who. Audio was my biggest problem in this animation. The music was way, way to over the top, you serously need to tone it down a little. Also the text was very difficult to read in places. I realise that this could be due to the convertion of the video into swf but it made it very difficult to know what the hell was going on! Content was the best part of this animation but I found that it was spoilt by the text.

Please sort out the text problem because overall it was not a bad animation, if you just sort out the text is could be a very respectable series.

All in all; 5 / 10


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alsk2007alsk2007

Rated 2 / 5 stars April 10, 2011

hard to read subtitles

most of em seem unreadable


Dice9Y4 responds:

yeah i had to lower the quality to upload it so......some text was ruined :{


SirKillingtonSirKillington

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars April 10, 2011

Argh

SUBTITLES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?



LordaapjesLordaapjes

Rated 3 / 5 stars April 10, 2011

im very sorry to tell you this.

but i couldn't read the subtitles...