Iron Man - A Simpler Plot
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- rated 3.78 / 5 stars
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- Genre:
- Comedy - Parody
- man
- iron
- phone
- ironman
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Author Comments
After watching Iron Man, I realized that a giant hulking robot that shot fire at arabs was a bit drastic for the genius Tony Stark to build... Surely this master of technology could have used his box of scraps in a cave and come up with something more efficient...
Reviews
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars April 9, 2011
not bad
Liked the animation and, overall, the drawings.
Still, the voice acting was...mediocre. And I didn't really like the joke, but mostly because it was executed badly. Not badly as in "horrible", but as in "could have been waaay better". You should definitely work on that.
However, I did enjoy it, and I hope to see more of your work (with a few improvements)
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars April 9, 2011
Great, but seems a tiny bit unfinished
Good animation and drawing. Reasonable pace and length. The music was a bit too casual in my opinion for the epic buildup and surprisingly simple solution. It could've also used a few easy sound effects that you could find at the findsounds website.
So, overall I give you a 9 because of the original and funny joke, nicely executed joke and good animation. Just needs some audio work.
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars April 9, 2011
Nice one
Did not see that coming for what it was that he was building haha good work on that one hopfuly there will be more yet to come from you.