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My first flash submission :D
Sort of a quick one that came to mind for a song I had in my comp:
A flash about leaving home, growing up, and facing your problems.
Enjoy if possible.
Needs more effort
This is pretty bad. Since it's your first animation, i'm giving you some tips:
- Don't make a loop of approx. 10 seconds and loop that a couple of times.
- The character becoming bigger 2 times when he is outside is just strange, fix it. I you want you animation to tell he has te grow up, at least let him get big one time. Nw it's just strange.
- Also, your graphics aren't very good either. If you want that style, you could at least polish it much more. But in my opinion, this is just a lazy style so you don't have to animate more.
I don't want to discourage you or anything, you just need a lot of practice and time to make good animations. Next time, put some more effort and time in it, and i'm sure it will get better ;)
Thanks for the tips :D, I really appreciate it.
the animation was nice but it needs work and needs MORE onto it instead of having it loop over and over
Yeah your right, I'll make my second flash longer. Thanks for the review :D
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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