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Mountain Range

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rated 1.84 / 5 stars
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Tags:
dream
growing
standing
mountains

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Uploaded
Apr 6, 2011 | 3:54 AM EDT

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Author Comments

My first flash submission :D

Sort of a quick one that came to mind for a song I had in my comp:

A flash about leaving home, growing up, and facing your problems.

Enjoy if possible.

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NuclearPositronNuclearPositron

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Needs more effort

Well,
This is pretty bad. Since it's your first animation, i'm giving you some tips:
- Don't make a loop of approx. 10 seconds and loop that a couple of times.
- The character becoming bigger 2 times when he is outside is just strange, fix it. I you want you animation to tell he has te grow up, at least let him get big one time. Nw it's just strange.
- Also, your graphics aren't very good either. If you want that style, you could at least polish it much more. But in my opinion, this is just a lazy style so you don't have to animate more.

I don't want to discourage you or anything, you just need a lot of practice and time to make good animations. Next time, put some more effort and time in it, and i'm sure it will get better ;)


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Ef-X responds:

Thanks for the tips :D, I really appreciate it.


ragondiconragondicon

Rated 2 / 5 stars

its ok

the animation was nice but it needs work and needs MORE onto it instead of having it loop over and over


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Ef-X responds:

Yeah your right, I'll make my second flash longer. Thanks for the review :D