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Apr 5, 2011 | 1:46 AM EDT

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If I could get some real input so I know what I need to do to improve, that would be awesome. Let me know what you do and do not like about it, I'm trying to improve here, but I need you all to help me do that.

I had a few more tweaks in mind for this, but using Adobe's shitty CS5, flash crshed while saving and made the fla file corrupt. I had to decompile it into a cs4 format and was left with such a mess and a headache, I figued I'd just give it a run as it. In case I wasn't clear, fuck some Cs5...I'm going back to the older version till they get an update that works...

/end ranting and bitchmode.

So this was just a simple idea of mine, it was originally a comic and I decided to try turning it into a movie. I couldn't find any good or fitting music/sound effects for the background so excuse that as a turn off. : /



Rated 5 / 5 stars


It was the other way around..


Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

are u serius

I didn't get probably not my style of jokes

BalladBlack responds:

Yea, look up what a glory hole is....


Rated 5 / 5 stars


tis funny! eh can't really say much on the animation if your gonna keep your style the same way or similar to it. Try soomthing some of the outlines down abit. Your Shading needs some improvement. If you wanted you could try a little more life like detail on the scene and the person. Facial Expressions seemed ok.


Rated 2 / 5 stars


I didn't like it. Maybe it was the art style or the plot.