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Apr 4, 2011 | 1:55 AM EDT
  • Daily 2nd Place April 5, 2011

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QUALITY CONTROL: "1" low, "2" medium, "3" high

Hey Newgrounds!

It's been too long since I have uploaded a flash short! I have always wanted to finish this three part series and it's finally done! I have left it alone too long and now I picked it up and just finished it in a couple of months.

If I can gather enough inspiration and motivation, hopefully I can keep this up! Critiques and comments are welcomed. I have been working on this short too long to know how it looks from an outside perspective anymore.

If you love the music, Don't forget to check out dragon-teenagers page.
http://dragon-teenager.ne wgrounds.com/
Awesome and a great guy to work with!!!

Enjoy!

Thomas

Edit: Thanks newground for daily 2nd and front page. It brought tears to my eyes thinking I would never make it there! Thanks to the newground staff, the great Tom fulps and most importantly, the newground memberss!

I will finally answer the bag questin with this image just for newgrounds!

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Reviews


71benc71benc

Rated 5 / 5 stars

0h mai GOD

i have absolutly no words 2 describe the epicness of this flash 999*/10.This is better than Dad, Leo and Satan and Eddsworld all put together. Just y'kno MAI Opinion!



Blitzxd1Blitzxd1

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Not going to write a super long review.

Just wanna say, this is like over nine thousand times better than your last ones. Like, wow. Amazing.

Oh yeah, and getting hyper fast after he drops the heavy-ass backpack was a pretty sweet touch. Totally didn't see that coming and it was pretty nifty.

Keep up the good work, maybe make your stories a little sexier but it's a freaking stick fight the story hardly matters that much. Good job mang.


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texjones1993texjones1993

Rated 4 / 5 stars

An improvement

The video is okay but I think the fight sequences are what made the video. The story leaves a lot to be desired. The first two were kinda sketchy and really didn't set a premiss for everything else. The brother apparently disappeared and the last one has him mutate into a giant, plus I really didn't understand if he was a kid in the other two. What makes this video shine from the others is the background was vastly improved and the action scenes seemed more realistic,(despite the defiance of the laws of physics.) Again the only crutch was the story. To be honest I watched this one without watching the prior videos and it seemed way better that way, though it explained a bit on why he was so hard pressed to kill demon. The dialogue was obvious and seemed like something a 13 year old was write, I mean "I need revenge" and "you should be dead?" and mostly the overly dramatic laugh. My suggestion for improvement would be to improve the dialogue by maybe watching less action filled videos or have a story that doesn't need a back story cuz I mean it's a stick action movie, you rarely need story for those. The action speaks for itself, I mean if you had no dialogue and just had a picture of the guy having a flash back of the red guy, you could have had the whole video work itself out without having to make them say something. I guess that really kinda speaks out the most though. In a stick cartoon, you really shouldn't imprint such a large story cuz the audience probably won't recall it anyways. What everyone is remembering more than anything else from this video is the guy removing the bag so the he could move faster after training his body to adjust to the weight; could you really say, "Wasn't he looking for his brother? Why wasn't it more heartfelt?" You just dropped it for no reason despite the fact that his goal from the very beginning was to find his brother. As the video by itself, I'd give it an 8; as an entire series I'd give it a 5. God I rant to long. Either way, just look at this as an opinion with a few tips because at the end of the day this is still only one person's opinion. The most beneficial thing for you to do is stay true to a stick flick animation, make the action kick ass, the story logical and consistent, and make as little dialogue as possible.


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TaldarisTaldaris

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

You've come a long way.

I watched the whole series, and I enjoyed it quite thoroughly, however I noticed that the plot line itself was fairly... patchy.
In the beginning it starts out as a man looking for his brother, and is confronted by a false person (Clone, monster, etc.)
In the second he's looking for a demon?
And the third he finds his mutant brother and kills the demon.
I really did enjoy the flash, and your talent has increased ten fold, yet the story line needs to have more work done.
(And on a side note, what ever happened to his cape from the first movie? I understand the loss of his wrist bands, but his cape vanished.)



MrGrimm6MrGrimm6

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Pretty good but...

It was a good animation but i agree with Bloodraven432. It did have a plot jump but i did end well in my opinion. The only other complaint i have is that up to the part to when he finds his brother the characters movements seemed alittle jumpy and slightly over exagerated but all in all it was a great flash. Execelent ending.