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Apr 3, 2011 | 3:10 PM EDT

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What might you get for a present my second flash and longest so far

Reviews


XwaynecoltXXwaynecoltX

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Very entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
notbad of a little flash you have here i thought your {MENU} screen could have looked better the one with the present and the play button a few things you could work on here would be adding some {COLOR} atleast to the present and the play buton you should give it more of a button like box or something, LOL the toon is short and very funny, the {AUDIO} is very scratchy, you may want to ad some {SUBTITLES} so you can better understand the dialog, but other then that it was still very funny, and since the toon was very short, maybe you should add a number of short tunes in one flash so that you have more {VARIATY} in there, just another idea that could improve on this cute flash, by the way great short toon, maybe abit more color next time.. anyways great stuff good luck on any other new stuff you got going on.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
on the menue screen ad a touch of color like the present and make the {PLAY} more of a button just an idea though, more color all around would be nice, I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see, also adding some subtitles would help as the audio was scratchy.

~~OVERALL~~
Short and cute flash, could have abit more and some few changes as stated above.

~X~


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VenturaTV responds:

Why did you go so out of your way to tell me that it needs color and better sound i made this damn flash in under a day thanks for loving it but im sure you could of done somthing else than type this review the present is a play buttion by the way not being rude but tell this to someone who gives a fuck


shadowpickleshadowpickle

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

great

seriously if you had better audio you might even show up on the front page... i like it a lot but just bad audio


VenturaTV responds:

Seriously when I was recording I had the master volume low so I thought my mic broke and It couldn't record in a good volume so I still recorded in a loud voice it was today when I realized i was recording wrong since I already deleted the original fla. So I can't fix it but I will make sure it dosent happen again


ZeroBoxProductionsZeroBoxProductions

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Its aight.

Liked the simple black n white stick character theme.
Could be better.


VenturaTV responds:

Thanks I finished it in less than a day at 2:00am to 6:00am I had no sleep that night


EndeavourEndeavour

Rated 4 / 5 stars

haha xD

Well, you dont even want to know how often i pressed the play button.
I thought it was a broken button at first until i figured i had to click on the present.

Not gonna "Repay" this =P

Good concept though, keep em coming.


VenturaTV responds:

The repay button actually ment see again I did it on perpose


EsotericismEsotericism

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Cool

It was crude, but the animation was smooth. I liked it.