This is
Awesome for your 2nd flash,walk cycles are good,the animation can be better,it is a bit chopy,you can execatly see the end of the movieclip animation,but overall good!!
9/10
5/5
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this is my second animaton at newgrounds i think this cartoon is shit but i'm very long time do it ))
think next work will be better )
Pretty good animation
Movements were a little choppy though. But other than that,this is great. Pretty good animation
what
what was so mature about it
Eh... not bad but...
I wasn't terrible, and I think this type of animation has potential, but really this had no story and was fairly predictable. I mean, obviously life is predictable in that we live then die, but more could be shown and more could be done with each phase of life. The animation itself could use some touching up as well, ie I couldn't tell what the teenage-phase was even doing as it was too small. Beef it up and I would like this a lot more