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Mar 27, 2011 | 2:21 PM EDT
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First Episode of Demon Tales finally arived on Newgrounds.
I got to say. I had alot of setbacks in this project. Sound Sync problems.
Wich i managed to fix. But it made the project WAY to big..
Still trying to find a way to compress it though..

And for those who don't have the patience to watch this way to big flash version.

Youtube Link:
http://www.youtube.com/wa tch?v=s9MwQuGNMhU

Reviews


Len-MysticLen-Mystic

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

I see potential.

The animation was alright, for what few movements there were, and some of the designs were nice (the city, soldier uniforms, etc.) The writing was a bit corny and the voice acting seemed like it was whispered into the microphone. It was odd how the opening monologue said they couldn't leave the city, and yet they leave the city on a boat near the end. Of course the reasoning behind their imprisonment may be due to the same military that apprehends the protagonist. However much has yet to be revealed in plot. It did part of what and pilot should and set events into action. Yet the viewers are still left without knowing these people or their motives, including the protagonist. The most I can tell about him is that he likes to talk to himself. I did like how this didn't rely on a long monologue to tell us what the world is like, and instead we just experienced it, setting up for a "show don't tell" type of display. Overall it can use improvement, but it isn't backwards ass retarded.


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hiace5hiace5

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

well...

its good, but thank good its only a piolet episod.
do it again, but better :D



Sam1-14Sam1-14

Rated 4 / 5 stars

This flash is very good

Good: Story is very plausible
Character designs are unique and voices are decent
backgrounds look great
Bad: The video lags when the fog shows up, I highly recommend not using filters at their highest quality.
At some points the character animation looks wooden and there isn't much lip-sync(even if you are doing an anime based style, the flapping lips could use a little more work). I recommend some body language if you can add it.
Overall: This flash is good in terms of story and design, but as mentioned by others, I hope you improve on the animation


Jochio responds:

Yea, The i know about the animation. But most of this was made a long time ago.
Piles of work came up and i had to delay it. This resulted in a long process of animations.

During this time i had learned alot of new things. And these things will be used in Episode 2. The Animation will inprove greatly. And i'll add some more emotions!
The graphical style will look better aswell, Same style. Only worked out better.

And the obvious thing that this episode is gonna be alot more action packed than the first one!

thanks for the review!


ephahephah

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Tons to work with.

Love the combination of futuristic technology, pre-nineteen hundreds tech, magic, a closed off city and some mysterious high council. Plus zombies.....=)



pbcollegeboundpbcollegebound

Rated 5 / 5 stars

great beginning

I love the story and the animation in this one. I really looks like it has potential to be a full series. Hope you make more soon.