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Mar 23, 2011 | 6:48 PM EDT

Author Comments

Hello. I'm pretty new to Flash and this is my first serious attempt at it, so I apologize if the drawings and animation are crude. Nevertheless, I'd like to turn this into a series, and I welcome any feedback or comments anyone has to offer. Hope you enjoy.

Reviews


RicePirateRicePirate

Rated 4 / 5 stars March 23, 2011

A script...

the animation, as you mentioned, not so hot. But the script and storyline is pretty great... the deliveries ... not always.

I have to score high for ambition and actually completing this monster.



sixflabsixflab

Rated 4 / 5 stars March 23, 2011

Nice intro

Not bad. The storytelling and overall script is intrigueing. For an introduction to the soon to be series it's quite long. The whole superhero thing makes for many possibilities too. The drawings could use some shading to create the appearance of depth and maybe a little less tweening. Looks like this series has potential.



bwcunninghambwcunningham

Rated 2 / 5 stars March 23, 2011

ehh...

work on the hands, and push the tempo. you may be onto somthing here... the other animations were okay though. voice acting and other audio was great.