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Mar 23, 2011 | 6:48 PM EDT

Author Comments

Hello. I'm pretty new to Flash and this is my first serious attempt at it, so I apologize if the drawings and animation are crude. Nevertheless, I'd like to turn this into a series, and I welcome any feedback or comments anyone has to offer. Hope you enjoy.

Reviews


zagzag

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars March 23, 2011

really good especially for your first real attempt

This was relatively well done. far better than most of what comes through the portal certainly.
kudos to you my friend ^.^



DBenderDBender

Rated 4 / 5 stars March 23, 2011

Cool...

I love the story so far. The voicing is okay, sometimes it sounds strange. The art is alright. You could really get me hooked if you freshened up your art work. Good job overall.



ClimbLaddersClimbLadders

Rated 4 / 5 stars March 23, 2011

nice

This is pretty good. I definately like the backround when it was night time.



AResponseProductionsAResponseProductions

Rated 4 / 5 stars March 23, 2011

"Not to shabby"

This is a pretty good story... I like how you used the powers of Gambit, Night Crawler, and Cyclops from X-Men. They are my favorite. Haha.



pitchellpitchell

Rated 4 / 5 stars March 23, 2011

It's Good

3/5 for the drawing and 5/5 for the story. Hope you continue making this series and improve your drawing skills, i know we have to start somewhere (and you just got started) you're doing a good job so far.