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Uploaded
Mar 23, 2011 | 6:48 PM EDT

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Author Comments

Hello. I'm pretty new to Flash and this is my first serious attempt at it, so I apologize if the drawings and animation are crude. Nevertheless, I'd like to turn this into a series, and I welcome any feedback or comments anyone has to offer. Hope you enjoy.

Reviews


stuntwillstuntwill

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Wow, a real story!

Week after week I watch portal entries that are 10 second animation loops, or 30 second animated shorts. Sadly, it's the 30 second shorts that get top honors of the day. I don't even care what the story is here, the fact that it's over 30 seconds is reason enough to give it a 10. Also, it is actually a cool story.



BadBoyMcCoyBadBoyMcCoy

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Good work man

Can see you put a lot of effort into this, really well written and quite funny in parts.. Actually lol'd at "spooky".

Good work man keep it up



ZiggynessZiggyness

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Good God,

How did you compress such a long movie to merely 8.3 mb? It's a great story, that's fer true. The art isn't as bad as I was expecting to be completely honest. And what you lacked aesthetically you more than made up for in content. The sound was good quality and apparently compressed efficiently.
Congratulations.



YAAFMdudeYAAFMdude

Rated 5 / 5 stars

More Please!

I love the story very Harry Dresden-ish.I love law enforcement and magic so I'm hooked.



OmnivoreOmnivore

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Wow...

For your first animation, this is a great start! The animation itself is a bit shaky and kind of looks like you did it in MS Paint, but the story made it worth watching! Hoping for a whole series in the future!