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FIVE YEARS IN THE MAKING..sheesh
syruplord and butterboy face off against the fantom fork and his evil minions. Will they save breakfastopolis from the clutches of evil? Maybe you'll find out if you watch this movie
The ending dude
Everything was pretty fun to watch, especially when they're small. But it really sucks when there's no sufficient ending.
contrary to what ppl says here i think your story is good and you dealt nicely with composition here, i can see anime influence in there too
nice stuff, it shows how much you learned from the beggining to the end, keep at it bro
I cannot say there was much I didn't like about this, very creative storyline although the story seems to be missing a few things. Like in the beginning there doesn't seems to me any reason to be protesting for freedom, the minions just come out of the hill guns'a blazin. And the lack of a solid, as not to say "final" ending really leaves the story lacking. But the music you used was absolutely perfect for the story, it flowed well, and was a good overall flash. Well done.
It's a good night for creativity on the portal. First a flash from Jeremy Lokken, and then this piece. I'm not familiar with your work, but I liked this. First off though, I have to knock off a couple of points for the ending, or lack thereof. The flash almost feels like is unfinished. Even if a sequel is on the way, this one as a standalone feels a bit incomplete.
Otherwise, the animation was great. Other than a couple of spots that seem a bit jittery, all the motion was fluid and lifelike. The visuals synched up to the music quite well; something not seen very often in flash shorts with only music in the soundtrack. The art and drawing of the flash were OK; on occasion it was hard to tell what a character was supposed to represent. Because the flash was so well done overall, that did not detract. I actually found the art style to be visually appealing. You used a nice color pallate. And the characters made an otherwise ordinary scenario/plot seem refreshing. Kudos for that element of creativity.
The lack of a solid, cohesive ending keeps me from going higher than a 7. It's a good 7 though. I liked everything else that the flash had to offer. Spruce up the storytelling and you've got a 9 or 10 in your future.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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