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ahh i'm lazy to call the typebot in ma' brain
Could be better...
It's funny and I get the jokes in it but I think you could improve on the animation. Then it would be even funnier.
I really enjoyed your flash; I thought it was very funny. I think my favorite parts were when he was flying through the walls and crashing.
If I were to fix this flash I'd simply change how smooth it was. It is very hard to understand what is happening in the flash by how fast it is going. You don't have to slow down the actions, just add more to it so everything lasts longer.
PM me if you have any new releases I'd love to see them.
It's time for Rifftrax...
Detective Nwar and his partner Blanche might as well investigate a water crisis.
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