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Mar 21, 2011 | 7:29 PM EDT

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Author Comments

This is my first major animation, so it's kinda crappy. You gotta start somewhere though, right? Hopefully I'll get better as I go along, as I intend to make this a series. Also, no, I did not mean for him to be as much like Salad fingers as he is...

Songs include:

Mr Crowley by Ozzy Osbourne

Il dolce suono by Gaetano Donizetti

and

Things I Wonder by The Shaggs

Those obviously don;t belong to me. Everything else does.

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EDIT:
Thank you for all the constructive criticism! I'll be sure to work on things for my next animation, and change Icharus to make him not so Salad Fingers like. XD

Reviews


FireNemisis13FireNemisis13

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Great!

I also liked it on deviantart ^^



NylonOstrichNylonOstrich

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Good Start

You gotta start somewhere. I'd say it's pretty good for a first but I think changing the voice a little bit and removing the "small child" part would help cut down on the salad fingers comments.



slappmedooslappmedoo

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Yeah, definitely makes me think Salad Fingers

Okay, critique:

The intro's a bit slow, especially since there's very little going on animation-wise other than panning and zooming. Some more dynamic ambiance would be nice. Maybe birds flying away, clouds moving, or hell, just trees blowing in the wind. The art isn't half bad; the biting animation was particularly smooth. That font's kinda hard to read because it's shaking so much.

The girl scout reminded me of Gir in some far off way.

Considering it's your first, this isn't awful. It's a better effort than a lot of users put into their first flash. Keep making 'em. They can only improve, right? 5/10 2/5



559RMR559RMR

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

Salad Fingers?

The fact that you said it wasn't supposed to be like salad Fingers make this a fail.
He sounds and looks incredibly close to Salad fingers.
the Animation of course is not as good as Salad Fingers.



RegretfulExpertRegretfulExpert

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Needs some work.

the voices are a bit to quiet, fix that and your golden. the animation is nice, and the story is cute. 5/10, and i hope to see a sequel/remake
-Regret