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Mar 15, 2011 | 9:53 PM EDT

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A little thing I threw together. I'm gonna re animate it so it looks smoother with a different story, but I was wondering if I could get some feedback on this one and I figure you guys are avid flash watchers and decent critics :D

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CHEAPTOONSCHEAPTOONS

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

this reminds me a Tim Burton's stain boy but he's more happier and a lot more friendly too GOOD STUFF



keegancostellokeegancostello

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

and pancakes were had

I love the scrumptious dance! Music went well, very simple. Isnt comedy supposed to be simple?


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ClockworkMan13ClockworkMan13

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

This one really made me laugh.

I'm usually very critical on drawing detail, but I though the whole crayon look really fit well with the story. I thought it was funny how the hero destroyed more than he saved. The name "Dr. Distasteful" was a nice touch. If you see a need to improve the animation by all means do so--just make sure to keep the simple, hand-drawn artwork.


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Nick-The-Holy-Potato responds:

Thanks!


ZiggynessZiggyness

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Sea Level

Man, anybody who builds a city beneath sea level is asking for a tsunami. Besides that, great animation, nice story I suppose, and the music was good too. ^.^


Nick-The-Holy-Potato responds:

It's just a really big puddle. ^.^


TripChargeTripCharge

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

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It's actually pretty good asides from being a tiny bit slow. Some sound effects could help. Also colours and backgrounds would change the flash (unless you're going for the doodle look). I'm just happy that at least one of the new submissions flashes has a button to start it.