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A little thing I threw together. I'm gonna re animate it so it looks smoother with a different story, but I was wondering if I could get some feedback on this one and I figure you guys are avid flash watchers and decent critics :D
Man, anybody who builds a city beneath sea level is asking for a tsunami. Besides that, great animation, nice story I suppose, and the music was good too. ^.^
It's just a really big puddle. ^.^
lmao... very nice XD
This one really made me laugh.
I'm usually very critical on drawing detail, but I though the whole crayon look really fit well with the story. I thought it was funny how the hero destroyed more than he saved. The name "Dr. Distasteful" was a nice touch. If you see a need to improve the animation by all means do so--just make sure to keep the simple, hand-drawn artwork.
It's actually pretty good asides from being a tiny bit slow. Some sound effects could help. Also colours and backgrounds would change the flash (unless you're going for the doodle look). I'm just happy that at least one of the new submissions flashes has a button to start it.
this reminds me a Tim Burton's stain boy but he's more happier and a lot more friendly too GOOD STUFF
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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