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First movie of the new year.
... Took a night and a half if you couldn't tell.
Hope you like it, it was a quick little thing me and Tristan came up with, I though I'd do it before getting into Venezuela II.
I do not mean to offend so... Don't take it that way.
Hope you enjoy it, Also there is an Easter Egg. Search.
Till next time, gents.
Your animation has developed quite well since this one, wooley!
I like to think so.
LoL haha xDD
haha thats great.
This should be on the front page, not all the crap made my any random 8 year old, witch is all thats happening latly...
Phew, I saw a new review and thought "Oh shit, another 12 year old calling me a racist."
Glad to see it was a guy with a good sense of humor. Thanks for the review.
I just love to see a cartoon or a movie that pokes fun of racism. It puts a smile on my face. That's what this short cartoon did, even though it was censored. But who gives a big pile of poopoo? You did a good job on this flash cartoon. And to think, you're a teenager. Very talanted.
I give you high scores for your unique artistic style. Something you would find on Cartoon Network's Adult Swim. I also loved how you had the anime influence on the eyes and how the mouths were moved. I even liked your choices of colors. A lot of good colors. Your characters, excluding the doggies, which were well-drawn, looked very good and had enough detail to make them perfect. I am also big on facial expressions and there were some good facial expressions.
Then why would I want to give you an eight? Well, you did make a huge mistake: This cartoon lacks background scenery. I felt that this cartoon was a lot like a child that was born without any arms or legs. It wasn't fully complete. A white background can sometimes work, but this cartoon would have been better if I knew where they were. Are they at the city park? A suburban neighborhood? A beach? I would have loved that. Maybe another day or two of making this would have helped. But, other than that, I liked this flash cartoon a lot.
This was a wonderful flash with a joke that brings happiness to people like me. I hope to see more excellent films from you. If I had the courage, I would love to work with you in the future. I would love to write for you, if you desire it.
Yeah I had the urge to make Tristan's dog unattractive. :p
Tristan is not amused.
Thanks for the kind words and the advice. A suburb would have probably fit.
If it helps you sleep at night, I actually have a sequel to this and another joke of the same nature written down waiting for animating.
over all nice but i should say to stop with the racist jokes those kinda make me angry but nice work i hope you upload more soon...
It's all light-hearted of course.
I don't mean to offend, just to give a laugh.
A story about a dog!
this art teacher is WHACK!!!!
Meeting new people on the first day can be a real gamble.
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