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Mar 7, 2011 | 11:32 AM EST

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It is the year 2801 and humanity is going to war with unknow aliens...
See the prior event that will lead to another war in the galaxy.
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Hey, Newgrounds population!
So this is my first flash movie, I hope you will enjoy it! :D

P.S. any ideas, help/tips or comments are welcome (especially the comments, cry your soul out on what you like/dislike :P)

Friendly greetings,
Cosmus :D

Reviews


MiloticMasterMiloticMaster

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars March 7, 2011

Interesting... but not enough...

You definitely have a skill in using flash. But I feel that this flash was lacking... interesting stuff. Most of the scenes had a severe lack of background sound or voices, and the text was mostly small and difficult to read. Even though your drawings were pretty good, most were done with the line/pencil tool, which gave everything a very 2D like perspective. The story wasn't especially captivating or exciting in anyway... neither did I find any of the characters interesting or intriguing...
The 'connecting' part was really long and annoying... the death of General 'Warpath was rather random... (but great drawings). The loading thing with the hologram was rather cool, but the lack of voices ruined the scene...
Sorry to point out so many bad things, but i'm trying to identify what you need to improve. If this is your first flash movie, you should experiment before trying to make a massive storyline. You definitely need to work on using the brush/pencil tool, because the drawings are really 2D and look childish. Try not relying on real pictures so much and get in touch with your drawing skills. The last scene with the planets was very nicely coordinated. Hope to see something better from you later!



SevenGentlemenSevenGentlemen

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars March 7, 2011

Extremley limted ability

Understood your still learing flash, your doing okay for a first effort but I can't give you more than 3 stars


Cosmus responds:

Why is it so limited?
Just assking so i don't do the same again