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Mar 6, 2011 | 5:18 PM EST

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It sucks right now but when I learn more ActionScript it will be awesome

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LibrarysageLibrarysage

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars March 6, 2011

Not bad, but clearly needs lots of progress

Two things to mention:

First, I agree with what was said before, the click next level thing should go. Going through the door should automatically bring you to the next level.

Secondly, make sure all of your cheese is actually accessible. There are wedges in spots too small to fit your character. Make sure the openings are wide enough to fit into.


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SuPeRcOoLdOOdSuPeRcOoLdOOd

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars March 6, 2011

Ok i Gess

You have to work on it but i still played for awhile



dabomb09dabomb09

Rated 4 / 5 stars March 6, 2011

Pretty good so far!

Maybe you should make a more proper jump animation just saying.


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Garden-StaterGarden-Stater

Rated 3 / 5 stars March 6, 2011

It's a Good Start

You clearly have some artistic skill, but as you mentioned in the description it needs work. Some things you can work on:

1) The controls aren't very intuitive. It's much easier to jump using space bar or the up arrow rather than reaching for "G" every time.
2) It'd be easier to go to the next level by making contact with the door, or opening it rather than having to use the mouse to click "Next Level"

If you're looking for feedback I'd suggest taking advantage of the Animation, Flash, and Programming Forums here on Newgrounds (newgrounds.com/bbs). They're always helpful, from what I've seen.

Good luck with the game, I look forward to the final result.

P.S. That song sounds familiar, I used to listen to it all the time many, many years ago. I remember it was a demo song that came with a midi or audio program. What's it called? I like it ... and miss it ... like an abducted child :( ...


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gabelossus responds:

that song is called canyon.mid it still exists in Windows 98


RhydonStalfosRhydonStalfos

Rated 4 / 5 stars March 6, 2011

That's OK if you're not okay with what you got.

Just keep trying and you'll make a better game progressively. You did a great job for a first try.