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Mest up on the blood spill again, But i was to lazy to fix it.
Animation was good except for the blood. Blood pools below the head, not on top of it. You need to use a better background (use some magazine photos) to convey the scenario. OH yea, don't make your flash loop; Its irritating to hear when I'm trying to write a review.
Not bad, could use a little more efort though.
Alright, I guess.
Other than the fact you took Knox's style for claymen, and their gestures for whenever they speak, it was alright. Voice synced up well, and the animation wasn't too bad, apart from the blood at the end. You really should work on that. I'd also suggest getting a better camera, this one doesn't have the best quality. Maybe recruit some voice actors too, and sheltered yells were a bit annoying.
If this was youtube...
If this was youtube I might comment on how bad the voice casting was but aside from that, the animation itself was very smooth. Even though there weren't any mouths, the voices fit perfectly with the motions. The plot of the flash seemed kinda pointless? But who really cares? I personally would like to see more manipulation of the clay next time. You've got some talent to sync movement with sounds, so it'd be cool if you do more stuff that would be unique to claymation (Like transformation, or better blood). lol
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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