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The story of a man, obsession, and chance meetings at a grocery market.
The story was confusing, I don't understand the mom and son relationship... maybe that's why he became crazy with such a weird old lady, over all... I hated the ending...
Good job there, nice read.
Only thing I dont like is the text in the bubbles, its 'kinda' unreadable some of it :)
Keep on jumping!
Really neat idea.
But maybe the tragedy at the end should come sooner. I realize most romantic loves are, for lack of a more fitting term, completely stupid, but - even if people are going to kill each other by accident - you sort of wish they'd do it in more interesting ways (do a "Hamlet" and kill a bunch more people by accident).
That was different but still i liked it, the main story made sence and was funny. But there were a few problems, The typing was hard too read and u could put it in color but i would understand if u dident cuz thats time consuming. Graphics were Great it was Funny and it made sence. d:^D>
Not bad at all
Let's get down to grinding.
Every Mancubus should have it's Dinner
Gaylord waits for the heroes to arrive...
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