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Jul 9, 2002 | 3:12 PM EDT
  • Daily Feature July 9, 2002

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The story of a man, obsession, and chance meetings at a grocery market.

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titanium-puppytitanium-puppy

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Confusing

The story was confusing, I don't understand the mom and son relationship... maybe that's why he became crazy with such a weird old lady, over all... I hated the ending...


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MaquresMaqures

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Great

Good job there, nice read.

Only thing I dont like is the text in the bubbles, its 'kinda' unreadable some of it :)

Keep on jumping!



MisterEdMisterEd

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Really neat idea.

But maybe the tragedy at the end should come sooner. I realize most romantic loves are, for lack of a more fitting term, completely stupid, but - even if people are going to kill each other by accident - you sort of wish they'd do it in more interesting ways (do a "Hamlet" and kill a bunch more people by accident).



sNaRkYpOOsNaRkYpOO

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Different

That was different but still i liked it, the main story made sence and was funny. But there were a few problems, The typing was hard too read and u could put it in color but i would understand if u dident cuz thats time consuming. Graphics were Great it was Funny and it made sence. d:^D>



Ziggy137Ziggy137

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Not bad

Not bad at all


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