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A commercial for the breakfast treat.
My first internet submission and cartoon that I've made in a while. Am I proud of myself though?
This is Really Funny
The art and animation was perfectly fine. The jokes were very funny and unsettling. The references to David Lynch were a big plus too.
This definitely deserves more than 700 views.
Thanks, guy. I think Surrealeal is well past its peak of getting a lot more views.
The art is what kept me watching. The animation was ok, but it seemed to lean on just having lots of shots, instead of movement.
Audio wasn't very good though, the acting was fine, but the quality was too low.
Still a very strangely entertaining piece, nice work on the art.
I agree, I should have worked a bit harder on my audio.
Thanks for reviewing!
You can't say "SurreaLeal" for the life of you,
I'm not buying anything from someone who can't say the name of his own product, lol!
I agree that its bizarre and the scripting could be better, but the animation's fluidity definitely helps. The artwork wasn't bad either, so 4/5.
I appreciate the constructive criticism. Thanks!
I in general liked this flash. I thought that it was well writen and had some great visual gags in it. The only thing that I would have improved on was the quality of the voice over, it sounds a little fuzzy.
Other then that its a great flash.
Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you liked it!
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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