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Made this for school. Hope ya'll like it.
Practice Outside of School
This demonstrates a fundamental understanding of tweens and even melodrama. Just remember that term blended "melody" and "drama" together, meaning it'd be far better off with sound.
Also, a common method of remedying the blood discoloration issue is to remember it gets darker when there's lots of it. Also, you can use a tool in flash to click upon an imported image featuring realistic blood and use those instead.
Still, it pretty much sucks from a comparison to what everyone else is doing. Fortunately there is always room to improve, although in this case there is one big gaping void....
A few things wrong with this.
1. blood is not orenge
2. do they have a history or what? (too short)
3. Just so dumb
the last one is for me... not you
Dark....I LIKE IT! :D Would be better with sound but hey, baby steps. Seriously this is a very well put together first flash. I am very pleased.
The animation was okay. Though it was quite simple and only tweens. The artwork isn't anything special; it's mostly simple shapes and rough brush drawings, but it's not horrible. The wall and path looked decent though.
As for the blood, it looked brown. You should use dark red.
Also, sound would have been nice. But it's not too big a deal for something like this.
its was okay
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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