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Ai, course project, hope it lasts a day
This width limit crap is a bummer...
Pretty Damn Promising
I must admit, I am jealous with all you have managed to pull off in this animation. You had characters, development, great music, and an interesting post apocalyptic world. However, there were things that could have been improved: frame rate, background textures, and a little more work into the voice acting could be beneficial. It also seemed a bit slow at parts. Great job, very promising, I hope you continue this sort of work.
Thank you, I'll work a bit on reworking those voice overs.
Not what I was expecting.....
I wish I could give this a better score, but the whole movie was waaaay too inconsistent. The framerate dropped in places, The animation was choppy in spots, The sound was all over the place, I couldn't follow the story at all, and although the drawings were good in places, I found most of the scenery to be too bland. I found myself having more fun trying to name what games/artists the soundtrack came from than I did watching the movie. I did like the 8/16-bit soundtracks though. The voice acting/recording left a lot to be desired, but the female characters performed better than the main character. All in all, I wish more time was put into this.
I'll redo all the voices later and I was planning on redoing all the artwork and animation later, thanks for the critique
Pretty good work
Obviously, it needs better animation/work, but this is pretty solid. You've put in effort, and I liked it.
Green Font kinda sucked, and I wish you sped this flash up a bit more. But very craetive. Nice job
I'll take that into account when I'm tweaking later
it was meh
wasnt really into it but it did seem like you tried your best
Thanks, I did
It's time for Rifftrax...
Detective Nwar and his partner Blanche might as well investigate a water crisis.
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