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My flash =-=
The character designs are cute and well drawn, my only problem with it is that the characters are too small, maybe make them bigger next time?
goddam writing titles is lame
(( the obove isn't a reference to your flash i just hate think of titles for a review ))
I thought the art work side of things i very good, near on excellent; buuuuut it wasn't suited to be made into flash. I think you focused more on the art, than giving any real thought into what little animation there was, because although i like your art work, i feel the characters where WAAAY too stationary, and they only ever had one look on thier faces, to be honest it almost looked like they where constipated, or suffering from major head-aches.
To summerise, just add more movement, more facial expressions. I don't know if this is your first flash animation, but you need alot of work. I think you could be good too if you buckle down to it. Good luck.
A short film about a park bench
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