Nice.
For the the amount of time you put into it, it was good. Maybe a lil color next time, oh and... making the wall actually explode instead of fading out would be good :D
Author Comments
I made this early this morning. It is my first attempt at frame by frame animation and ended up shorter than I had hoped it would.
This stickman is attempting to destroy this wall. The wall separates this city from the rest of the world and he wishes to reunite his town with the world...and whatnot.
Comment please, I'd like your input please :)
riotpopper responds:
k, i'll keep it all in mind. and the lack of color is part of a storyline i eeked out a few minutes before actually starting the project
your animation is okay
but this is a case where you need to spend more time with the cartoon and make a fleshed out story or have some point to watch the flash.
riotpopper responds:
ok.us i actually do have a story thought out for this, but i made this as a test and uploaded it to get feedback.us im so new to flash its not even funny.
Keep iit up
Someday You will at the level of Aceofredspades and the llike if you keep improving
riotpopper responds:
thanks, it means alot to me :)
hmmm...what the? Whats that sound...
Interesting concept, a stick figure fighting a concrete wall with-- AHHH CUT OFF THE MUSIC, CUT IT OUT!!! Your audio is looping AND re-playing another trackload!! I'm not sure if it was your intention, but It'll get annoying very quickly. This might get blammed, but it might not. I suggest you add colors and audio control.
riotpopper responds:
im looking up how to stop the looping right now ^^
Good dabble into animation
I'd suggest sticking with it. There's definitely some talent here. As its own movie on newgrounds however, I don't really get the point. It's unclear exactly what's happening. That aside, the animation is smaller than the frame window. When the song loops it plays over itself. Finally, find a way to prevent the movie from looping itself over and over automatically.
riotpopper responds:
im working on the looping problem, thx for posting