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This is my first flash movie. If there is slight errors, well don't blame me. Since it's my very first time making a flash movie.
This really does make a YouTube Poop look good...
Art: 4/10 Can't give a high score to something technically not sprited by you.
Animation: 2/10 It's very plain, stiff, and looped.
Sound: 3/10 Just a bunch of already overused YouTube Poop references.
Story: 1/10 No story what so ever.
Presentation: 4/10 looped and boring, the only good part would be when Kirby threw a Cookie at the dude.
Final Verdict: 10/50
A 2 out of 10 for boring uninspired work.
Fix. Your. God. Damn. Sound Clips!
It's not terrible
For a first try it's actually pretty good. Unfortunately that's about all that can be said in favor of this animation. The sound quality is very poor, and the jokes were a bit lacking. Would be a great way to drive a person insane, if you just keep letting it loop over and over and the music continues to stack until it's a jumbled mess of noise with vague rhythm.
it was a pretty funny video and all, but it wasn't really that great, as well as the fact that the play button is glitched and the video starts by itself, and if you watch it a second time without leaving the page, the music doubles up and it sounds really messed up.
Good effort on the video
it's alright considering it's your first animation . keep working on your skills . I look forward to seeing some more vids from you =]
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