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PaperBagHeadMan returns to (reluctantly) take on more crime!
Joined this time by Captain Can't Spell and Sexygirl, they have to stop Dr Impolite's diabolical plan to ruin a famous masterpiece!
Hope you all enjoy the second episode in the series!
If you missed episode one, find it here: http://www.newgrounds.com /portal/view/562238
Loved the improved animation work, though doctor impolite sounded like you were just holding your nose to do his voice work.
Yeah, cause that's what I was doing.
hey its me again!
I see you took my advice and made the sound quality better! I liked this episode more then the last one! your getting better good job! my favorite part was when he text "cum qwik" lol! that was so funny! 5/5 for you!
Yeah, I did, so thanks again ^_^
I'm glad you enjoyed it and I have to thank you for following the series so far =]
I like the Joke's timing. The rough style works I think, but you gotta really sell it with the Voice-work..... I like the nonchalant thing for the gag but it's almost too restrained too much of the time. (Let loose and just adjust your mic down if your blowing it out with a real yell). As for the visuals, Maybe try to very your blocking (Most of it was in Mid-shot off below the knee)
Thanks, this has been very helpful =]
So really what you're saying is, just try to make it more casual? And possibly a few different camera angles?
I'll make sure to improve in the next episode ^_^
That guy, Dr. Impolite was it? Was he trying to use Ryu's Hadouken?
lolz, no, he was powering up like in DBZ or something. Or at least that was what I was going for =/
The voices sound very strained.
Like you're not supposed to be making loud noises so you're having to keep a hushed tone, especially when shouting. It sounds uncomfortable and makes the dialogue sound awkward and unnatural.
Yeah, a few others have said about that, I'll have to try and sort that out.
Thanks for your review =]
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