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Made this in 2 days.
NG updated their review system so it doesn't have headers/an impact anymore, so I guess this tutorial is obsolete!
gr8 tut dud! LOL
Best review tutorial ever.
very nice tutorial.
i found most of the parts humorous such as the robot voice failing at saying your examples. i think it could be a little more interesting, like a better voice, or even no voice and let us read it.
the left / right arrow controls were pure genius, but i find this more of a movie than a game, like making a timer or something i don't know. but it was done in 2 days so i guess you've done good on that part.
GOOD MUSIC BUT NEED TO BE COLORD MORE
CONEPT VERY BASIC
SHOOT ME A PM OR HAVE LOOK AT VOICE ACTING THREAD
Huge throbbing member!
Now that I've got your attention, lets get down to business. A great little piece, full of malice and humour, especially the punchline. I won't spoil it, the people need to click through and listen to it read by Speakonia (or is it Microsoft Sam?) themselves.
The concept is very basic and could use being coloured up a little. Some images illustrating reviews of this calibre would help in the pages referring to each part of the review themselves. You're clearly very learned on internet culture, so it stands to reason that you've seen these, so why not share them? The grey background needs some work, as it reminds me too much of a Conservative Party Conference. If you're after voice acting for this piece, shoot me a PM, or have a look at the Voice Acting thread, as the users in there might be able to inject another level of impetus into the piece. Not that you've done a poor job here, I might hasten to add!
It was good music that you chose for the piece and if I did anything different, I might suggest that you go and make a slight change to the controls, with mouse activated buttons, as it keeps the interactivity under one roof - it's not a game, after all.
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Thanks! I might make an updated version later. (It's sam from Speakonia btw.)
WAI DUZ DIS HAV 3.08 SHUD HAVE AW!!!
What’s inside this box? A lot of puzzles! Can you solve all 30?
Use the mouse to navigate menus and to queue and cancel robot actions.
Made for the Adventure Jam 2016!
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