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ammm... nothing more to say, just this is a experiment of a flash style, like clasic newgrounds flash animation. =D wuiiiii
It's decent but...
Seeing the whole franchise which Egoraptor started on newgrounds, I think graphical wise it was decent. Much better than what alot of the NGers that work this style whip up. But... No where close to the top in this "area of animation". And personally I suggest you look for your own style in animation.
I think this movie is at a good starting point and you should work with it.
Animation: The animation was pretty good. If you wanted to make it better you should try to make the voices match up with the mouths. I know that will take a lot of work, but you want quality right? I also think it should be slowed down, the words were moving pretty fast.
Storyline: There wasn't really one, they are just yelling at easy other. Not really much I can say about that except for that you should make a reason of why they are yelling.
Creativity: I like it; I haven't seen a video where the characters are speaking a different language and there are subtitles. You should do more with that.
Overall: Great work! This is your starting point, grow from here. Message me if you have a new release.
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