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"Would you like to eat my seed?". If in the same situation it is advised to decline the offer for seed. Your touching of the burger didnt not sway things in your favour for a tasty, disease-free treat.
I kind of like the voice acting and the concept in total, but the graphics were definitely lacking. You really need to up it up on that part, and a bit more GRAPHIC ANIMATION will make this animation MUCH MORE SCARY. Good luck ;D
Cheers for the feedback. Once I get better at the animation I'm kind of going for a David Firth Salad Fingers style outlook on the animation as I love it and its creepy as hell!
This is an educational film teaching the veiwer not to eat his burger, or he Will Kill You. Life lesson learned.
I enjoyed it.
I'm assuming this is some of your first flash work, and it's coming together pretty good. It's a lot better than those people who just upload anything that create just for the sake of doing it.
In the matter of improving your content I'd just make everything more defined and cleaned up. For instance, I'd make the "Replay" button and actual button, not just a circle. It makes everything look more professional.
Cheers for the feedback. Honest but not insulting! Ive been using flash for a couple of years now on and off for leisure but I wanted to start it more frequent recently for some friends at uni and other audiences. I think if i make evil narrator a frequent thing I will take the ideas onboard and go from there so thanks :)
Very very funny.
interesting and overall animation but was boring, try something more interesting, good luck!
Will do! This was just a two hour mini project because I was bored but in future if i have better 'plot' ideas I will try to imrpove the animation graphically. Thanks for the criticism!
A short film about a park bench
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